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Dreamz Unlimited

>> Wednesday, June 25, 2008

She was screaming her lungs out, so were the fellow tourists. The roller coaster was much more than she had bargained for. The adrenaline rush that it gave her was surely going to stay for a long time to come.

The Roller coaster, a little rickety and old, jostled its occupants around. The twists and turns it took, would give even the best crime writer a race for his money. The final descent was exhilarating to say the least. All the joy riders were shaken at the end of the ride but longed for more.

However a sudden honking startled them all, roller coasters don’t have horns do they?? Then where was this ear piercing sound coming from?


The dream had been shattered. The driver was still honking; today was the day all of them were practicing for the upcoming “Honking Olympics”. She was left wondering, but weren’t competing for “Roller Coaster” of the year award!!!. But an Olympic medal was not bad, however it came, she dreamed on …….

18 comments:

Mansi Trivedi June 25, 2008 at 10:39 PM  

:)
such is life!
well written

Keshi June 26, 2008 at 10:31 AM  

wow! love the way u express the innermost feelings.

And ty for dropping a comment in my blog :)

Keshi.

Deepti June 26, 2008 at 12:14 PM  

@Mansi: thanks alot

@Keshi: Thanks for dropping by :)

Cinderella. June 26, 2008 at 1:09 PM  

Wow !
How we make do with imagery and perception...!!

Beautiful.

mayz June 26, 2008 at 3:27 PM  

initially i thot u were writin abt an autorick!!! hehe

but dat was really well put...u shud update more often!!

Macadamia The Nut June 26, 2008 at 5:24 PM  

LOL!!!!
I've felt the same way on autorickshaws in India :D

Beautifully written

g-man June 27, 2008 at 11:53 AM  

i have no idea what you're talking about here :|

Deepti June 27, 2008 at 12:38 PM  

@Cinderella:Thank you !!

@Mayz:Autos... I am a frequent traveller there too .. yeah will update more often, been very very tied up lately as youc an see from the length of my posts. Thanks

@Maca:Autorickshaws here are poor man's F1 car. Thanks :)


@G man: Vice president , iwas writing about the long ride i take to and from office, where there are Honking olympics are roller coaster rides :)

g-man June 27, 2008 at 12:39 PM  

ah...now that i know what it is...

well put :)

Neena Padayatty June 28, 2008 at 12:30 PM  

"The twists and turns it took, would give even the best crime writer a race for his money."

Brilliantly phrased!

Deepti June 28, 2008 at 12:58 PM  

@ g-man: I am relieved :)

@Neena: Thanks dear!!

Solitaire July 1, 2008 at 10:16 AM  

Haha! I wish that the dream was true and that it was indeed a roller coaster.

Deepti July 1, 2008 at 1:51 PM  

@Solitaire: I wish so too .. love roller coasters :)

mathew July 1, 2008 at 9:46 PM  

nice analogy...life is indeed a roller coaster ride!!

And there is no exhiliration in a roller coaster ride..man thats one scary ride!!!;-P

Shantanu July 2, 2008 at 1:12 PM  

Ha ha! Funny. Every day is a roller-coaster ride in Pune, what with the rain-pothole combo liberally available to us all, and free too. :)

Deepti July 2, 2008 at 2:42 PM  

@Mathew: hehe I like roller coasters :)

@Shantanu:yeah now its even more thrilling :) and more bumpy :(

Nikhil Narayanan July 3, 2008 at 12:09 PM  

As Mathew said, Roller Coaster -I wait to get out of it, not life :)

Deepti July 6, 2008 at 1:28 PM  

@Nikhil: Roller coaster indeed!! best part about it is, you can get out of it. Life isnt that way!!